Refined the sketch a little bit at home. Possibly the most important alteration is her breasts.
In the first sketch she's so covered up as to appear androgynous. she's actually a very pretty and feminine girl she's just small breasted. I've used her a lot so you'll be seeing more of her.
But I wanted it to be clear in the drawing that she's a girl so I made enough of a change that you can see the curve of her breast past her arm. I also added very slightly to her hips. Small change, big difference.